Evicted's plot structure has been written. The story changed so much it was bizarre to see what characterization can do to a story when you thoroughly develop the characters and allow for them to tell their story in depth. I as the writer sat back and listened and reported Stone telling the story. It was so magnificent. I finished the lot for now by focusing on Stone and sent it to a friend in LA for review. She dug the start. I will work on strengthening the plotline more along the way while reading Syd Fields Screenplay.
Thanks,
M
Thanks,
M